Magic Dust [beautiful poem and picture]

Had I only known, how you felt that day…
But you never told me, and I walked away.
I was just a child, you were more mature
Everything was foggy, all I saw was blur.


You should have known better, you should have expressed
How you felt about me, and we’d have ran west.
I was way too young, I had crazy dreams
I took life for granted, this is how it seems.

I thought you made plans for a life of joy
Far away from me and my stupid toy.
Yes, it is still there, but with eyes all cold
The brown bear you gave me, with the love untold.

And the little bottle, with the “magic dust”
I now get your words: “break it if you must”.
So I did, in anger, just the second day
When you smiled in sorrow and I smashed that tray.

Then there was silence and I could have sworn
That there was a tear, in your heart a thorn.
In my foolish pride, as I turned away
I couldn’t even hear your sweet “darling, stay…”

Now it is so late, all these years have passed
Darling please forgive me, forget me if you must.
But I never will, you’ll be in my heart
Till the end of time, we won’t be apart.

Even if you live a lifetime away
Every night I dream you and I always pray.
I pray you are loved and you always win
I pray you are happy, like we should have been.

9 thoughts on “Magic Dust [beautiful poem and picture]

  • July 12, 2011 at 6:22 pm
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    Such a beautiful and soul touching piece. Well done!

  • July 12, 2011 at 7:17 pm
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    Thank you Neva! I appreciate the comment, especially that it comes from you, such a talented writer!

  • July 15, 2011 at 5:19 pm
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    I agree with Neva – a beautiful soul touching poem. Congrats :-))

  • July 15, 2011 at 5:26 pm
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    This is so beautiful, and expressed with such deep feeling, that it made me go shivery down my spine … it’s as though the words were written for me, yet I know they weren’t. When poetry can bring such a profound effect it is something special.

  • July 15, 2011 at 5:38 pm
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    It is a life story very well poetically expressed with sad end. Why do people leave us after showing their love and devotion ?

  • July 16, 2011 at 12:38 am
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    Very heart-felt poem. Nice work Giulia :)

  • July 16, 2011 at 9:34 am
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    Thank you all for the nice comments, I’m glad that you like it! :)

  • July 17, 2011 at 2:28 am
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    Amazing. The words are so close to the feeling that I thought that was about my past, but instead it is yours. There is so much heart felt love in the poem that it made my heart feel sad for a bit. Giulia, Such BEAUTIFUL words you have written here…..

  • July 20, 2011 at 3:01 am
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    Love will last forever.

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